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People have personal strengths and weaknesses that shape their life in a positive or negative way I see that life is a learning experience which can help us become better individuals in anything we choose to So, the most important thing is that we can recognize our weaknesses to improve it and make a change I mean that is our faults in work and in daily life I think/ I recognize that/ In my opinion/ From my perspective, we can become better individuals if Honestly, I think my weakest trait is my impatience I actually work in marketing fields That profession requires agile and dynamic personality so when I work in a team and a member is not performing up to my expectations, I can get impatient and annoyed I understand if they are working hard and their task is difficult, but sometimes a person can't the assignment due to incompetence or laziness But I thought I can help out by explaining things to some people and encouraging lazy people by reminding them of deadlines I know it's not good to be impatient, but I'm definitely working on it My weakest trait is being impatient I realize it during the time I start working in the professional environment ., so (phẩy xong dùng từ so) in the team.work, a member Câu tốt Thay laziness by neglectfulness or irresponsibiliry cho formal Thay lazy neglected In daily life, I really hate waiting for something or someone I know, we often say that waiting is happy, but it is hard for me to see things or anyone being late or slow I think if we always don't get things done on time or earlier, that can't help us a great job, even complete our tasks and stuffs Although, sometimes, we have to wait for right moment make things become perfect, and if we say or something without thinking enough, it is really bad Also, things step by step, it helps us have some time to take a rest In daily life, I cannot bear waiting for someone due to their procrastination or waitinh for something that is left undone after deadlines It is said that happiness is waiting, but in the working context, it is frustrating to deal with undone tasks I think that if people frequently not finish their work on time, that can result negatively in the work outcomes of only themselves but also those who involve in the work We have to wait for right moments to get the best result , vế sau k liên quan Doing thing step by step helping us have time to take rest I know I still have many different weaknesses but this is the worst Fortunately, I realized it and try to improve it everyday Nobody is perfect, so it is important to recognize your weaknesses and develop your strengths and make yourself perfect day by day but this is the worst one / develope your strengths to make yourself thrive day by day Comment: Your gramma is very fine and overall, the essay is good I want you to focus on gramma first,so I don't give comments on your ideas See some sentences that I rewrite and learn from it Keep doing the good work like this!!! GRADE: A- ... strengths to make yourself thrive day by day Comment: Your gramma is very fine and overall, the essay is good I want you to focus on gramma first,so I don't give comments on your ideas See some