HOW TO WRITE PROBLEMS – SOLUTIONS ESSAY Chúng ta lấy đề writing sau làm ví dụ xuyên suốt chia sẻ để bạn có minh họa dễ Các đoạn paragraphs chia sẻ từ trang ielts-simon.com chỉnh sửa để có template dễ áp dụng cho readers Keep reading and enjoy the template! In the developed world, average life expectancy is increasing What problems will this cause for individuals and society? Suggest some measures that could be taken to reduce the impact of ageing populations BỐ CỤC BÀI VIẾT PROBLEMS – SOLUTIONS Introduction: - Introduce the topic: Dựa vào câu đề paraphrase lại câu Câu đề là: In the developed world, average life expectancy is increasing In the developed world = in industrialised nations Average life expectancy is increasing = live longer It is true that people in industrialised nations can expect to live longer than ever before - Give your answer to the question Đề hỏi problems solution cho vấn đề trên, bạn cần đề cập trước thân bạn giải Problems Solutions Although there will undoubtedly be some negative consequences of this trend, societies can take steps to mitigate these potential problems WEB: http://thanhloanblog.com/ FB: https://www.facebook.com/congdonghocielts Page Body paragraph 1: Problems - Problem (General) - Explanation/Example and Result Hai vấn đề Khi tuổi thọ trung bình tăng, số lượng người hưởng chế độ lương hưu tăng Kết phủ trả tiền lương hưu cho người già đồng thời chịu giảm sút tiền thuế, lực lượng lao động trẻ phải bù vào phần thiếu hụt Người người ta trở nên già hơn, họ thường hay đối mặt với vấn đề sức khỏe Khi đó, phủ phải đầu tư nhiều cho dịch vụ chăm sóc sức khỏe người trẻ phải dành nhiều thời gian, tiền bạc cho việc chăm sóc sức khỏe người già Topic Sentence: Câu topic sentence đóng vai trò câu văn đường để người đọc biết bạn viết đoạn văn Nó câu tóm tắt nội dung đoạn Cụ thể đoạn văn đầu tiên, bạn tác động tiêu cực vấn đề tăng tuổi thọ trung bình Several related problems can be anticipated when people live longer and the populations of developed countries grow older Problem General problem: The prime issue is that there will obviously be more people of retirement age who will be eligible to receive a pension Vấn đề đầu tiên, bạn sử dụng cụm từ như: The main/first/most obvious/ most important + issue/problem/matter is that + clause Explanation and result: WEB: http://thanhloanblog.com/ FB: https://www.facebook.com/congdonghocielts Page The proportion of younger, working adults will be smaller, and governments will therefore receive less money in taxes in relation to the size of the population In other words, the increasing number of senior citizens will mean a greater tax burden for working adults Paraphrase: Paraphrase vấn đề đáng quan tâm Academic Writing Bạn dùng từ “elderly people” từ đầu đến cuối Thay vào đó, bạn sử dụng: senior citizens/members, people of retirement age, nói toàn thể: ageing population Academic Words: Những từ ngữ mang tính học thuật làm viết trang trọng văn phong viết Ví dụ: senior citizens, the number of…, tax burden Linking words để đoạn văn đươc trình bày logic dễ theo dõi, có kết dính phần, đoạn: Moreover, Therefore, In other words Problem General problem: Further pressures will include a rise in the demand for healthcare Further pressures từ dùng để chuyển sang ý thứ đoạn Bạn sử dụng cụm từ khác: Another problem/pressure | Additional problem(s) is… Explanation: …… as a result of the fact that elderly people are often subject to many diseases Result: In this way, the government will have to invest in healthcare and young adults will increasingly have to look after their elderly relatives Từ đó, bạn có đoạn văn thân bài: Several related problems can be anticipated when people live longer and the populations of developed countries grow older The main issue is that there will obviously be more WEB: http://thanhloanblog.com/ FB: https://www.facebook.com/congdonghocielts Page people of retirement age who will be eligible to receive a pension The proportion of younger, working adults will be smaller, and governments will therefore receive less money in taxes in relation to the size of the population In other words, an ageing population will mean a greater tax burden for working adults Further pressures will include a rise in the demand for healthcare as a result of the fact that elderly people are often subject to many diseases In this way, the government will have to invest more in healthcare and young adults will increasingly have to look after their elderly relatives Body paragraph 2: Solutions Có solutions đưa thấy rõ từ đoạn văn: - Tăng tuổi hưu trung bình từ 65 lên 70 - Khuyến khích nhập cư để tăng lượng người lao động, người đóng thuế - Sử dụng nguồn vốn từ lĩnh vực khác There are several actions that could be taken to eradicate the problems described above Firstly, a simple solution would be to increase the retirement age for working adults, perhaps from 65 to 70 Nowadays, people of this age tend to be healthy enough to continue a productive working life A second measure would be for governments to encourage immigration in order to increase the number of working adults who pay taxes Finally, money from national budgets will need to be taken from other areas and spent on vital healthcare, accommodation and transport facilities for the rising numbers of older citizens SAMPLE: WEB: http://thanhloanblog.com/ FB: https://www.facebook.com/congdonghocielts Page It is true that people in industrialised nations can expect to live longer than ever before Although there will undoubtedly be some negative consequences of this trend, societies can take steps to mitigate these potential problems Several related problems can be anticipated when people live longer and the populations of developed countries grow older The main issue is that there will obviously be more people of retirement age who will be eligible to receive a pension The proportion of younger, working adults will be smaller, and governments will therefore receive less money in taxes in relation to the size of the population In other words, an ageing population will mean a greater tax burden for working adults Further pressures will include a rise in the demand for healthcare as a result of the fact that elderly people are often subject to many diseases In this way, the government will have to invest more in healthcare and young adults will increasingly have to look after their elderly relatives There are several actions that governments could take to solve the problems described above Firstly, a simple solution would be to increase the retirement age for working adults, perhaps from 65 to 70 Nowadays, people of this age tend to be healthy enough to continue a productive working life A second measure would be for governments to encourage immigration in order to increase the number of working adults who pay taxes Finally, money from national budgets will need to be taken from other areas and spent on vital healthcare, accommodation and transport facilities for the rising numbers of older citizens In conclusion, various measures can be taken to tackle the problems that are certain to arise as the populations of countries grow older SAMPLE OUTLINE It is true that -topic - Although there will undoubtedly be some negative consequences of this trend, societies can take steps to mitigate these potential problems Several related problems can be anticipated when -topic The main issue is that -problem Explanation/example Further pressures will include WEB: http://thanhloanblog.com/ FB: https://www.facebook.com/congdonghocielts Page problem Explanation/example - -Topic can also result in problem Explanation/example There are several actions that governments could take to solve the problems described above Firstly, a simple solution would be to -solution Explanation/example - A second measure would be -solution Explanation/example - Finally, solution Explanation/example In conclusion, various measures can be taken to tackle the problems that are certain to arise as -topic Template có sẵn cho bạn 100 words, nhiệm vụ bạn đơn giản nhiều cần hoàn thành 150 words lại vòng 40 phút Template có sẵn từ cụm từ academic vũ khí lợi hại để đạt điểm cao Template dễ áp dụng cho dạng problems – solutions Tuy nhiên, template hoàn hỏa tuyệt đối, khuôn mẫu không ngoại lệ Nếu bạn dân khối D ngoại ngữ tốt, bạn không nên gói gọn khuôn mẫu định NGÔN NGỮ VÀ CẤU TRÚC SỬ DỤNG Dùng để diễn tả mối quan hệ nguyên nhân kết RESULT ………… Due to …… CAUSE Owing to Because of Caused by Brought about by WEB: http://thanhloanblog.com/ FB: https://www.facebook.com/congdonghocielts Page On account of As a result of CAUSE … Results in … RESULT Causes Gives rise to Leads to Brings about Accounts of Đưa cách giải Trong cấu trúc bạn nên sử dụng câu bị động nhấn mạnh cách giải mà bạn đưa Steps Should Measures Must Be taken So as to Solve …………… In order to Overcome………… Combat………… Could Deal with ………… Eradicate ………… Serious attempts to halt/ prevent / solve …….must be taken One (possible) Another Way to Solve/ overcome/ This problem combat/ WEB: http://thanhloanblog.com/ FB: https://www.facebook.com/congdonghocielts deal The Would be … problem Is… Page An alternative People with/ eradicate of… Should focus their/ our To solve/ overcome the problem of … attention on ways To improve the situation of… To reduce the impacts of ….on society… CẢM ƠN CÁC BẠN ĐÃ ĐỌC BÀI NẾU BÀI VIẾT HỮU ÍCH, HÃY LIKE VÀ SHARE ĐẾN BẠN BÈ CỦA MÌNH BẠN SẼ TÌM ĐƯỢC NHIỀU THÔNG TIN HỮU ÍCH KHÁC TRONG FANPAGE NẾU BẠN ĐANG MUỐN HỌC IELTS MÀ CHƢA BIẾT NÊN BẮT ĐẦU Ở ĐÂU, CÁCH HỌC NHƯ THẾ NÀO, HÃY THAM KHẢO: http://thanhloanblog.com/category/new-english-events KHÓA HỌC MỚI NHẤT: THÁNG 12 HỌC XONG TRƯỚC TẾT ĐĂNG KÝ TẠI: http://123.uhm.vn/136735 ĐỂ NHẬN MAIL KHI CÓ THÔNG TIN CỤ THỂ VỀ KHÓA HỌC WEB: http://thanhloanblog.com/ FB: https://www.facebook.com/congdonghocielts Page ... taken to eradicate the problems described above Firstly, a simple solution would be to increase the retirement age for working adults, perhaps from 65 to 70 Nowadays, people of this age tend to. .. take to solve the problems described above Firstly, a simple solution would be to increase the retirement age for working adults, perhaps from 65 to 70 Nowadays, people of this age tend to be... expect to live longer than ever before Although there will undoubtedly be some negative consequences of this trend, societies can take steps to mitigate these potential problems Several related problems