DISCUSSION: FOR & AGAINST ESSAYS Introduction continuing debate * In recent decades/ nowadays In our rapid changing the world There has been a In this modern time discussion over…………… *There is a view that…………… (hold/ agree/ point out/ claim) that Many = most People/ experts/ scientists are of opinion that…. Some support the view that * However opposites of this (problem) are that … (= However others oppose this…. that………… * Both sides of this complex issue will be discussed in this essay. examined analized ] Body1 (Đưa ra luồng quan điểm 1) * To begin with, there are several ( reasons/ advantages) of… * The most ( serious/ important) reason/ advantage is……… * It is a well documented fact that………= It is true to say that… (=This is ( clearly) illustrated/ shown by the fact that…. (phát triển tiếp theo dùng in addition/ Futhur more/ apart from/ what is more) Body2 (Đưa ra luồng quan điem 2 đối lập với 1) * On the other hand, there is a wide range of evidences for supporters to Defend their idea of… * there is no doubt that …/ It is obvious that… ( Tiếp tục phát triển đoạn dùng từ như moreover/ besides/ in addition…) Conclusion To sum up/ All things consisdered/ all in all/ taking everything into acount ( consisderation). This complicated issue has not only… but also Có thể thêm vào phần kết đoạn sau nếu vấn đề đó mang tính xã hội The government/ the authority should be consult with experts in this area in order to devise an effective programme for ( reducing/ decreasing) the (advantages/ disadvantages ) of this The implication of that might be better/ NHỮNG LƯU Ý KHI VIẾT ESSAY Should do shouldn’t do - Use passive voice. It is argued that It is a common belief that - Nen dung tu vung đa dạng, mức độ cao (advanced voc, verbs, adj ) - su dung linking words/ phrases. Eg: further more/however/nonetheless - Dung complex sentences (although - Dung đảo ngu (were it true, we would /never has this been more obvious ) - Đồng hóa, chung hóa: In most developed coutries - Thể hiện trình tự/ liên từ -Qui chiếu từ nguồn khác. (Eg: experts have proved that ) -Dùng short form can’t/don’t/isn’t -Tránh đưa ra các vd cá nhân : in my school -Dùng cụm từ, tục ngữ, thành ngữ đưa ra những thành ngữ/ câu xáo rỗng -sử dụng từ đơn giản quá/ câu đơn giản. Eg :I think ta dùng to my way of thinking - Tránh lien từ quá đơn giản. Eg: and, but, so thay vao đó dùng câu phức hay cấu trúc both and/ not only but also/ those who -Tránh bày tỏ quan điểm cá nhân hay cảm xúc một cách mạnh mẽ. Eg: I absolutely detest people who - ko nên khái quát, chung chung quá. VD: all politicans are Tránh đưa ra con số thống kê ko chính xác. . view that * However opposites of this (problem) are that … (= However others oppose this…. that………… * Both sides of this complex issue will be discussed in this essay. examined analized ] Body1. moreover/ besides/ in addition…) Conclusion To sum up/ All things consisdered/ all in all/ taking everything into acount ( consisderation). This complicated issue has not only… but also Có thể. experts in this area in order to devise an effective programme for ( reducing/ decreasing) the (advantages/ disadvantages ) of this The implication of that might be better/ NHỮNG LƯU Ý KHI VIẾT ESSAY Should