LỜI NÓI ĐẦI Nhiều bạn gặp khó khăn với Writing task 1, dưới dây là những vấn để thường thấy: + Không nắm bắt được những dặc điểm chính của bài viết main features nên không viết tốt dượ
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5 DẠNG BÀI IELTS
WRITING TASK 1
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Nhiều bạn gặp khó khăn với Writing task 1, dưới dây là những vấn
để thường thấy:
+ Không nắm bắt được những dặc điểm chính của bài viết (main features) nên không viết tốt dược đoạn Overview trừ điểm Task
Achievement + Không biết cách lựa chọn và xử lý số liệu nên bài viết lan man, không có hệ thống trừ điểm Task Achievement và Coherence 8
Cohesion
+ Viết ít hơn 150 chữ trừ điểm Task Achievement
+ Sử dụng sai thì (tense) trừ điểm Grammatical range & accuracy + Sử dụng từ vựng không phù hợp với ngữ cảnh (report) trừ điểm
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+Dang1: Trend charts + Dang 2: Comparative charts + Dang 3: Mixed charts
+Dang 4: Maps +Dang 5: Process
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The graph below gives information on the number of subscribers* paying to use fixed telephone lines and mobile/cell phone networks in Africa between 1994 and 2004
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
Telephone subscribers per 100 habitants, Africa 1994 - 2004
“subcribers: people who pay to use a certain service
Trang 5The line graph shows changes in the number of landline and mobile phone users in Africa throughout a 10-year period from 1994 to 2004
Overall, while there was a steady increase in the number of subscribers of fixed telephone lines over the given timescale, mobile phones dramatically gained in popularity and becamea more preferred choice of communication
In 1994, an average of 2 out of 100 Africans used fixed lines, whereas almost no one subscribed to mobile phone services The figure for landlines then rose slightly and gradually throughout the following years, reaching about 3 users for every 100 inhabitants in 2004
By comparison, while the 1994-1998 period also recorded a minimal increase in the number of mobile phone users The population using this kind of service suddenly doubled to1
in 1999 and continued to rise substantially to nearly 10 in the last surveyed year 2000 marked the year when mobile phones started to surpass fixed telephones lines in terms of popularity 2000 marked the year after which the number
of mobile phone users far exceeded that of landline users
Trang 6The table shows the amount of money given in aid of technology of developing countries by
charities in the US, EU and other countries from
2006 to 2010
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
The table compares the levels of technological aid measured in billions of USD) to developing countries, provided by charitable organizations based
in the US, EU and other regions between 2006 and 2010
Overall, aid provided to these countries for technological development saw an increasing trend, with the US lending the largest support, far exceeding the combined amounts from EU and other countries
The total amount of money given in the form of technological aid in 2006 was 15.7 billion USD It can be seen from the table that this figure was nearly double that after 5 years Always accounting for the largest proportion, the support from the US increased significantly from 9:7 billion USD in 2006 to 227 billion USD in 2010
In comparison, the level of support from the EU and other countries was much lower With regard to the former, the figure climbed slightly from33
to 5.7 billion USD from 2006 to 2008, followed by a dip of 011 billion USD in
2009, before increasing to 4 billion USD in 2010 The aid from other countries also showed an upward trend, with the figure reaching 33 billion USD compared to only 2:7 billion USD in the first year
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Dang bai ‘Comparative charts’
thường chỉ có một mốc thời gian
(thường là một năm) hoặc không
i ` có mốc thời gian nào (dùng thì hiện a đơn để viết) Ngôn ngữ chính dùng trong dang bai
này là ngôn ngữ so sánh (Comparison language)
BÀI MẪU 1 (Bar chart - không có thời gian)
The chart below shows the result of a survey of patients who stayed
in three different wards* of a hospital It shows what percentage of
the patients replied ‘very good’ about various aspects of their
hospital experience Summarize the information by selecting and
reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
% of patients who replied ‘very good’
about their hospital experience, by ward
@ Holly Ward
8 Maple Ward
@ Oak Ward
*ward:room orareas for groups
of patients
Trang 8The bar chart compares the positive feedback in terms of four aspects given by patients staying in three different wards of a particular hospital
Overall, the Holly Ward is the best rated ward, whose patients are most likely to be satisfied with the four given aspects of the hospital, while those staying at the Maple
Ward are least satisfied
Around 90% of patients at Holly Ward give positive feedback regarding hospital staff, treatment quality, and aftercare services
noticeable differences in
the rating patterns of patients at the two other wards The quality of treatment, being the most satisfactory aspect of the hospital, is ranked
‘very good’ by 80% and 70% of patients at the Oak Ward and the Maple Ward Hospital staff and the quality of aftercare arewere rated quite similarly, with about 70% of patients at the Oak Ward giving positive feedback and lower figures of around 55% for those at the Maple Ward
Patients in all wards seem less happy with the waiting time
The Holly Ward also has the largest percentage of satisfied
patients, at approximately 75%, which is about 20% higher than the figures for the other two wards This is the only category in which the Maple Ward ranks higher than the Oak Ward
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The charts below show the percentage of people aged 23-65 in different occupations in one UK town (Ashby) and in the UK as a whole
in 2008 Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
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lo Shop work Professional work
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3 Personal service L0 3
The pie charts compare the proportion of people between 23 and
65 years old working in six different sectors in Ashby town and in the
entire UK in 2008
Overall, it is readily apparent that the unemployment rate in Ashby was higher than in the UK Compared to average UK employment patterns, workers in Ashby were more likely to work in personal service, office, construction and shop fields Professional and technical domains, on the other hand, were not well-presented in
his town
In 2008, the unemployed in the whole of the UK made up 10%, compared to a slightly larger figure of 14% in Ashby The employment rates in construction work, shop work and personal service in Ashby were generally higher than the nationwide average rates, with figures varying widely from 13% to 21%
The percentage of 23 to 65-year-old office workers in both Ashby
and the UK were comparable, at 18% and 19% respectively The
national figures show that the average worker in the UK was twice
as likely to be employed in technical and professional positions as their counterparts in Ashby, with proportions of 17% and 14% for the
UK versus 9% and 8% in Ashby
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USA +170
Germany +80
Switzerland +120
Britain +230
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Average cinema visits by age group
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in Australia from 1994 to 2002, while the line graph provides a breakdown
of attendance according to four different age groups
Overall, annual attendance witnessed a slight rise throughout the given
period Conversely, the frequency of visits saw a fluctuating trend with a
shift towards recovery at the end of the timescale It is readily apparent
that people aged 14-24 were consistently the most frequent moviegoers
According to the table, the proportion of the population attending the
cinema rose moderately from 67% to 72% between 1996 and 1998 and
remained relatively stable over the period However, the number of visits
per year saw a less significant increase from 10 to Tl visits in the same
period but then fell by 3 and remained unchanged for the remainder of
In direct correlation with the table, the line graph shows that all age
groups seemed to frequent the cinema more often in1996 with the lowest
attendances recorded among all age groups in 1998 However, numbers
for the 14-24 years old remained moderately higher until the end of the
timescale with 10 visits, compared with their counterparts in other age
groups who reflected the national average of between approximately 7
and 8 visits
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DANG 4: MAPS
1 Phan loai ‘Maps’ theo kh6ng gian: Outdoor maps & Indoor maps
2 Phân loại Maps theo thời gian: Quá khứ - hién tai & Hién tuong lai
BÀI MẪU1 (Indoor map - Quá khứ & hiện tại)
The maps show the library five years ago and now
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant
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5 years ago Now
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Overall, the library underwent several major changes regarding facilities and extra services, which make it more space-effective to serve more visitors
Five years ago, there were two areas of book shelves located
at the back and the front of the library The former, which was much larger, has remained intact, while the latter has been replaced by a desk for students to use their laptops
On the left-hand side, the classroom has been converted into a recording studio Meanwhile, a help desk has been added to the area which was previously used for book borrowings and returns, with a new separate area for readers to return books Whereas the meeting room retains its position beside the recording studio, the library office
has been replaced by a conference room in the bottom
right corner
The space previously allocated to study tables is now divided into thirty-six individual seats organized in six rows, accommodating more private space for readers Where four desktop computers previously stood, there is now a desk for students to use their own laptops
Trang 15The maps below show Thunderstone Town at Present and a proposed plan forit
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant
PROPOSED PLAN {ae
(Nguồn ảnh: ZIM) The map illustrates planned infrastructural developments to Thunderstone
town
Overall, the proposed plan aims to improve the connectivity between the
townand the main road A2 through the addition of more road links, a large
roundabout, and a new railway route With the suggested infrastructural
development, the town would be more accessible from the north and the
south
Currently, Thunderstone town, together with its built-up area, is accessible
from the A2 Road via an arterial connected with the ring road of the town
Another way to reach Thunderstone town center is by railway which runs
parallel with A2 Road and is situated between the A2 and the town center
Agas station lies at the intersection of the railway and the connecting road
The proposed development is an additional road, named A4, to the south,
directly linking the A2 with the Thunderstone ring road from the south A
large roundabout will also be installed in proximity to the current gas station The airfield in the northern area will be replaced by an industrial
estate which can be reached via the A2 Road from the West or via a railway
extension from the east