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Có nhà thám hiểm huyền thoại nói “Nếu người, lý gì, có đời phi thường, người khơng quyền giữ cho riêng mình” Cũng có nói “Kiến thức có giá trị nhân rộng” Đây lý khiến sứ mệnh giúp bạn trẻ Việt Nam thay đổi phương pháp học tiếng Anh không ngừng sục sôi trái tim đầy nhiệt huyết đội ngũ WISE ENGLISH – người gặt hái thành công đường chinh phục ngôn ngữ WISE ENGLISH ý tưởng nung nấu ấp ủ với nhiều năm không ngừng nghiên cứu, thử nghiệm, cải thiện dần đến hoàn thiện WISE đời, mang theo sứ mệnh cao giúp bạn trẻ Việt Nam thay đổi phương pháp học tiếng Anh theo TƯ DUY NÃO BỘ (NLP) NGÔN NGỮ để chinh phục ngôn ngữ cách NHANH NHẤT HIỆU QUẢ NHẤT Đây phương pháp áp dụng thành công mang lại kết khơng tưởng cho đội ngũ nhà sáng lập WISE ENGLISH Trên chặng đường hoàn thiện phát triển, WISE ln tự hào với học viên thân điều khác biệt khơng ngừng tạo ngày, Thay khiến học viên phải chết chìm phương pháp học tiếng Anh truyền thống, hiệu quả, phương pháp WISE mở cánh cửa cho người học, rút ngắn 80% thời gian học so với phương pháp truyền thống trường sử dụng trung tâm Anh ngữ khác Đồng thời, WISE hướng dẫn học viên trở học ngôn ngữ cách TỰ NHIÊN NHẤT để cảm nhận “giai điệu” phong phú tiếng Anh, vì, tiếng Anh ngơn ngữ tuyệt diệu đầy cảm xúc, thứ giúp bạn thể thân theo nhiều cách khác Sau chặng đường gian khổ trải qua, thành tựu mà WISE đạt vượt thành công mặt lợi nhuận, thứ cịn tuyệt vời hơn, điều mà WISE ln ao ước, chạm đến, thay đổi cải thiện trình độ tiếng Anh cho nhiều học viên, người với xuất phát điểm hoàn tồn khác WISE ENGLISH vui mừng nhìn thấy bạn dành thời gian để có tay sách Chắc hẳn bạn muốn cải thiện khả tiếng Anh dù bạn loay hoay mù mờ mặt định hướng học tiếng Anh bình tĩnh WISE biết cách để giúp bạn đường cần áp dụng phương pháp cần thực LỜI NÓI ĐẦU “Study Smarter, not Harder” - WISE ENGLISH Các bạn cầm tay sách “IELTS WRITING – CẨM NANG HỌC IELTS TỪ A-Z” tổng hợp biên soạn đội ngũ WISE ENGLISH Writing kỹ “khoai” không người học IELTS mà cịn người học tiếng Anh nói chung Ngay người xứ mà tác giả sách có dịp làm việc trao đổi Anh quốc, để viết essay hay họ không đơn giản Writing khơng địi hỏi người viết phải có tư logic, xếp ý, kỹ đưa luận điểm thuyết phục “back up” luận điểm dẫn chứng ví dụ thuyết phục, mà cịn địi hỏi người viết phải thật chuẩn ngữ pháp, cách dùng từ Đơi ngữ cảnh, ngữ nghĩa có nhiều cách dùng từ ngữ khác nhau, chọn từ đúng, hay, lột tả ý tưởng câu chuyện không đơn giản Đối với IELTS, khơng phải giải nhiều đề liên tục kỹ WRITING bạn nâng BAND điểm, bí quan trọng cho thi việc nắm rõ cấu trúc đề thi, cách lập dàn bài, lên ý tưởng dẫn chứng thuyết phục, cộng với kỹ viết chuẩn ngữ pháp cách dùng từ linh hoạt, bạn có essay tuyệt vời Đối với bạn học IELTS Writing lại kỹ khó nữa, việc viết quy tắc ngữ pháp dùng từ ngữ cảnh “academic” việc bạn hay mắc lỗi Hiểu vấn đề này, sách “IELTS WRITING – CẨM NANG HỌC IELTS TỪ A-Z” đội ngũ WISE ENGLISH đời với mục tiêu giúp người học làm quen với dạng IELTS WRITING, cách lên dàn ý viết essay hoàn chỉnh, đạt điểm cao với ngữ pháp chuẩn lựa chọn từ vựng hợp lý Quyển sách có gì? “IELTS WRITING – CẨM NANG HỌC IELTS TỪ A-Z” bao hàm kiến thức giúp người học làm quen với cách viết thi IELTS Writing Quyển sách hướng dẫn chi tiết cách làm dạng thi IELTS Writing Task Task Có 09 học nhỏ tương ứng với hướng dẫn cách viết cho phần bao gồm Introduction, Overview, Body, (đối với Task 1) Introduction, Body, Conclusion (đối với Task 2) Quyển sách phân loại dạng Writing thường gặp dạng biểu đồ theo thời gian – Dynamic Charts, Dạng biểu đồ không thay đổi theo thời gian – Static Charts (đối với Task 1), dạng Opinion, Discussion, Problems and Solutions, 2-part questions… (đối với Task 2) để dễ dàng xử lý Khơng có vậy, học có Chiến lược cụ thể cách làm để đạt điểm cao cách paraphrase cho hay hiệu Mỗi vấn đề nêu có Ví dụ - Examples minh họa cụ thể, hình ảnh trực quan giúp người học không bị lúng túng học dạng Bên cạnh đó, sách cung cấp cho người học nhiều luyện tập - Exercises sau học giúp người học thực hành ghi nhớ kiến thức sâu lâu “IELTS WRITING – CẨM NANG HỌC IELTS TỪ A-Z” không tập trung sâu khai thác vào dạng câu hỏi phổ biển IELTS mà sách cung cấp lượng từ vựng cấu trúc câu đa dạng phù hợp với văn phong viết Từ vựng sách tuyển chọn cách kỹ lưỡng, bao gồm từ vựng band 8.0 – 9.0 hướng dẫn chi tiết cách dùng, nhằm giúp học viên nâng cao vốn từ vựng academic Mặc dù từ vựng band cao sách viết đơn giản, dễ hiểu, phù hợp với bạn làm quen với IELTS Trong học, sách thiết kết tập Practice phần Homework để bạn học có hội luyện tập viết đoạn Phần cuối sách có đính kèm đáp án - Answer Key câu trả lời mẫu nhằm giúp bạn tham khảo nâng cao khả tự học tự cải thiện lỗi sai Lưu ý WISE chọn lọc essays mẫu giám khảo chấm band điểm từ 8.0 đến 9.0 nên bạn hoàn toàn yên tâm học theo style mẫu Mặc dù mẫu band cao WISE tuyển chọn style cho dễ dàng áp dụng với đa số bạn sĩ tử IELTS Khi bạn làm muốn sửa liên hệ đến dịch vụ CHỮA BÀI WRITING đội ngũ WISE ENGLISH để sửa góp ý sửa lỗi tận tình nhé! Vì sách ngơn ngữ tiếng Anh, nên trước (Lesson), WISE có soạn số hướng dẫn tóm tắt để bạn đọc tiện nắm ý dễ theo dõi Học hồn tồn ngơn ngữ tiếng Anh giúp bạn nhanh nâng cao trình độ Đó lý đội ngũ WISE soạn sách hoàn toàn tiếng Anh Quyển sách có nhiều hình ảnh minh họa giúp người học hiểu cách trực quan sinh động hơn, phát triển trí thơng minh (theo nghiên cứu NLP – Ngơn ngữ lập trình Tư duy) Tác giả sách ai? Cả sách “CHIẾN LƯỢC LÀM BÀI BAND 9.0” “IELTS – CẨM NANG HỌC IELTS TỪ A-Z” sản phẩm đội ngũ Giáo Viên Phát triển chất lượng WISE English với IELTS 8.0+ biên soạn tổng hợp suốt trình dạy tiếp nhận khó khăn, thách thức bạn học viên, với người chịu trách nhiệm nhà sáng lập WISE English, anh Lưu Minh Hiển (Thạc sĩ trường ĐH Kinh tế Khoa học Chính trị London – LSE, Cử nhân ĐH Manchester, Anh quốc, loại Xuất sắc, top 0.5% sinh viên xuất sắc toàn trường, thầy giáo dạy kèm nhiều sinh viên Anh, Mỹ, Châu Âu), đồng thời người sáng lập phương pháp Học từ vựng bước ứng dụng Ngơn ngữ lập trình Tư (NLP) vào việc học ngôn ngữ WISE đời với Sứ mệnh giúp bạn trẻ Việt Nam thay đổi phương pháp học tiếng Anh theo TƯ DUY NÃO BỘ (NLP) NGƠN NGỮ để chinh phục ngơn ngữ cách NHANH NHẤT HIỆU QUẢ NHẤT Slogan WISE “Study Smarter, not Harder” Quyển sách dành cho ai? Quyển sách dành cho bạn bắt đầu làm quen với IELTS, có tảng tiếng Anh tương đương A2 khung lực châu Âu (CEFR) có mục tiêu đạt IELTS 5.5 – 6.5 trở lên Quyển sách thiết kế để dành cho tự học, thầy sử dụng sách giáo khoa lớp Sách cung cấp đủ học để giảng dạy vòng 50-60 WISE English tin “IELTS WRITING – CẨM NANG HỌC IELTS TỪ A-Z” mang đến cho bạn trải nghiệm thú vị bổ ích Đây chắn kim nam giúp bạn đạt điểm số cao thi IELTS Writing, đồng thời thành công đường chinh phục IELTS Chắc hẳn sách cịn nhiều thiếu sót, góp ý xin gửi hịm thư điện tử ebook@wiseenglish.vn để giúp tác giả hoàn thiện sách lần tái sau có sách tốt đến với quý vị độc giả WISE English chân thành cảm ơn chúc bạn học tập thật tốt! Chìa khóa mở bạn bắt đầu lật trang sách Phạm Văn Thanh, 23 tuổi, sinh viên “Em thấy sách phù hợp dành cho người bắt đầu làm quen IELTS Writing em Em nghĩ bạn nên làm hết tập sách để nắm vững kiến thức hơn, dễ dàng nâng band điểm Sau task có đính kèm ví dụ liên hệ giúp em hệ thống kiến thức tốt, làm quen với dạng bài, điểm cộng mà sách để lại ấn tượng em” Nguyễn Quỳnh Mai, 21 tuổi, sinh viên “Theo trải nghiệm thân người có kinh nghiệm tìm hiểu vài sách trước định tiến tới học IELTS, sách bao qt tồn thơng tin từ độ khó đến dễ cấu trúc thi Academic Mình bị ấn tượng phần analysis exercise mẫu, đọc vô thấy dễ hiểu, dễ rút cấu trúc câu phải gọi “bất hủ” cho thân để vận dụng đề Mình cảm thấy có nhiều thứ để học khơng mẫu câu mà cịn phần từ vựng Kiểu task có vocab cho dạng biểu đồ tập áp dụng khỏi phải băn khoăn tra từ vựng phù hợp Task hướng dẫn kĩ cách viết từ outline đến đoạn introduction tới body conclusion, chia dạy đoạn nên không sợ bị rối không kịp thời gian để phân tích sâu phần đâu nha” Võ Thị Phương Nhung, 17 tuổi, học sinh “Mở đầu sách thông tin khái quát kỹ Writing, điều giúp em tránh hoang mang tiếp xúc đến thi IELTS nhiều Chỉ với học đủ để tổng hợp kiến thức cần phải biết để làm phần Writing Đa số tập để bạn tiếp cận vào học dễ dàng, sau nâng cao, theo mức độ tăng dần giúp nhanh chóng hiểu sâu kiến thức Các tips strategies mang lại hiệu cho em nhiều áp dụng vào làm đề mẫu từ em rút nhiều kinh nghiệm cho thân nâng band điểm qua ngày” Nguyễn Diệu Huế, 17 tuổi, học sinh “Được tiếp cận với sách IELTS WISE đặc biệt kỹ Writing hỗ trợ nhiều cho - đứa khó khăn việc học Writing Về mặt nội dung riêng phần này, đánh giá cao mức độ tổng hợp khái quát lý thuyết bước cần thiết để làm thi IELTS hồn chỉnh Đối với task 1, học cách nhận dạng phân biệt xứ lý loại biểu đồ Còn task 2, chủ yếu hướng dẫn bố cục việc lên ý tưởng cho đoạn văn nghị luận xã hội tiếng Anh cách rõ ràng Ở task có phần sửa lỗi sai bản, lỗi thường gặp mắc phải thi Phần từ vựng cấu trúc câu dùng cho viết nghĩ đủ cho người bắt đầu học, làm quen IELTS Nói chung, thấy sách ổn áp với bạn có nhu cầu đạt band đến 6.5 mình” GENERAL INFORMATION - INTRODUCTION HOW TO WRITE AN OVERVIEW 24 HOW TO WRITE ABOUT DYNAMIC CHARTS HOW TO WRITE ABOUT STATIC CHARTS PLANNING INTRODUCTION 48 70 89 110 BODY: OPINION - DISCUSSION 138 BODY: DISCUSSION & OPINION, PROBLEMS & SOLUTIONS, TWO-PART QUESTIONS 163 CONCLUSION & CHECKING 190 GENERAL INFORMATION - INTRODUCTION HOW TO WRITE AN OVERVIEW 217 220 HOW TO WRITE ABOUT DYNAMIC CHARTS HOW TO WRITE ABOUT STATIC CHARTS PLANNING INTRODUCTION 223 229 234 241 BODY: OPINION - DISCUSSION 251 BODY: DISCUSSION & OPINION, PROBLEMS & SOLUTIONS, TWO-PART QUESTIONS 262 CONCLUSION & CHECKING 274 Trung tâm anh ngữ WISE ENGLISH The possible solution to these problems is to maximise the use of public transport The government should aware the people to use public transport and put emphasis to legally control the private transportation Furthermore, the use of public transport also saves the expenditure which we spend on buying own means of transportation (ielts-mentor.com) “Success is often measured by wealth and material belongings Do you think wealth is the best measure of success? What makes a successful person?” Money and valuable material possessions are not best indicators of success People struggle in their life to accumulate wealth in abundance, as many believe that wealth is ultimate goal of life, but it does not follow that all wealthy people are successful Success is getting contended with one self, value in social circle, strength in family relations A wealthy person might not be happy with his fate, as he could be struggling to achieve goals that he thinks are important to his life Hence, money is not ultimate goal of every person Achieving life goals makes a person successful Every person sets goals in his life which he makes efforts to achieve, getting these goals give him sense of satisfaction with himself and his life, that sense of satisfaction is success Take, for example, I personally know a guy who spent all his life to earn enough money to build a small home for his children After forty years of savings, ultimately, he succeeded to build small home for his children in year 2015, he was satisfied with his efforts that he finally accomplished his goals In my opinion, he was among successful people in 2015 (testbig.com) 273 Trung tâm anh ngữ WISE ENGLISH CONCLUSION Exercise “Some people think that all university students should only be allowed to study subjects that will be useful in the future such as those related to science and technology To what extent you agree or disagree?” Introduction: It is widely thought that all universities should only allow their students to study subjects which will be helpful in the future such as science-based subjects I completely disagree with this point of view (Adapted from ielts-mentor.com) Now, paraphrase some words in the Introduction above: • Thought = acknowledge • Universities = higher education • Subjects = majors • Helpful = useful • Science-based subjects = subjects related to science • Point of view = opinion  Conclusion: In Conclusion, I am not of the opinion that the higher education should force students to study only some useful majors such as subjects related to science I strongly believe that undergraduates have a right to study a large range of disciplines to enhance their abilities and knowledge Exercise “In some countries young people are encouraged to work or travel for a year between finishing high school and starting university studies Discuss the advantages and disadvantages for young people who decided to this.” Introduction: Before enrolling in college, many young people are advised that a year working or travelling may be a good option This essay will suggest that saving money is the biggest advantage of this and a reduced motivation to study is the primary disadvantage (Adapted from jolo.edu.vn) 274 Trung tâm anh ngữ WISE ENGLISH Now, paraphrase some words in the Introduction above: • Enrolling in = apply to • College = tertiary education • Young people = the young • A year working or travelling = a gap year • Good = beneficial • Option = decision • Advantage = good side • Disadvantage = negative impact  Conclusion: In Conclusion, having a gap year before applying to tertiary education has both good side and negative impacts Exercise “It is becoming increasingly popular to have a year off between finishing school and going to university Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?” Introduction: Nowadays, many high school graduates decide to take a one-year break, before starting university While there are several certain benefits for students who this, I believe there are far more drawbacks Now, paraphrase some words in the Introduction above: • High school graduates = students graduating from high school • Decide = choose • Take a one-year break = take a year off • Starting university = going to college • Several = a lot of • Benefits = advantages • Drawbacks = shortages  Conclusion: To sum up, I strongly believe that taking a year off before going to college brings more advantages to students graduating from high school than shortages 275 Trung tâm anh ngữ WISE ENGLISH Exercise “In many countries, the quality of life in the large cities is worsening What possibly can cause this problem? What measures can be taken to resolve it?” Introduction: There is a decline in the quality of life witnessed in a huge number of countries across the globe This essay will point out the reasons behind this and suggest some possible solutions to overcome the problems of city residents Now, paraphrase some words in the Introduction above: • Decline = decrease • Quality of life = life quality • Witness = experience • A huge number of countries = several nations • Across the globe = all over the world • Possible solutions = potential methods • Overcome = tackle • City residents = people in urban areas  Conclusion: In Conclusion, although there are a number of factors causing the decrease in the life quality of people in urban areas all over the world, people still can make some potential methods to tackle this issue Exercise “Many people prefer to watch foreign films rather than locally produced films Why could this be? Should governments give more financial support to local film industries?” Introduction: It is true that foreign films are more popular in many countries than domestically produced films There could be several reasons why this is the case, and I believe that governments should promote local film-making by sponsoring the industry (ielts-simon.com) Now, paraphrase some words in the Introduction above: • Foreign films = films produced by foreign countries • Are more popular = have higher reputation • Many countries = a lot of nations 276 Trung tâm anh ngữ WISE ENGLISH • Domestically produced films = local films • Several reasons = a number of reasons • Governments = authorities • Promote = encourage • Sponsor = support  Conclusion: In Conclusion, although there are a number of reasons explaining the higher reputation of films produced by foreign countries compared to local films, I think that authorities can encourage this industry by supporting it financially Exercise B D D C A A B D C 10 A Exercise People need a lot of time to get used to living in a new country Researches into space explorations can lead to new cutting-edge technology Handwriting skills are still essential even in today’s modern world The best way to tackle the problem of littering is to have more bins available The government should spend more money on the arts in order to protect cultural identity An increasing number of people are choosing to travel by cars rather than public transports If students are involved in making decisions about how a school is run, it might lead to problems While some people think that children should be given more homework, others believe that children should be free to enjoy their leisure time Because of the lack of exercise taken by average people, obesity and other weight related problems are on the rise 10 The second solution that can be adopted is that an emergency fund should be raised to help the victims 277 Trung tâm anh ngữ WISE ENGLISH Exercise Mother and father both play a crucial role in the upbringing of children Some people believe that women often make better parents than men while others claim that men are as well as women at parenting I am personally of the opinion that women make better parents Some people go to universities to get further education to enhance their horizon or to improve their job position and salary Others go to the college and universities to let the world know that they are educated Funny this may seem but many people simply consider the higher education as a status they are required to get a higher position on the society To sum up, I think both cities and rural areas have their own charm Cities have more busy and hectic life but have better facilities, rural areas, on the contrary, have more relaxing lifestyle but lack in up-to-date technologies PRACTICE a “Full time university students spend most of the time studying They should be doing other activities too To what extent you agree or disagree?” Introduction: It is widely argued nowadays that full-time undergraduates at university should engage in other activities instead of staying concentrated on their studies only I strongly agree with this opinion Now, paraphrase some words in the Introduction above: • Nowadays = these days • Undergraduates at university = university students • Engage in = spend time for • Concentrate on = focus on • Strongly agree = strongly concur  Conclusion: In Conclusion, I strongly concur that university students should not only focus on studying but also spend time for other activities 278 Trung tâm anh ngữ WISE ENGLISH b “Having more money and less free time is better than earning less money and having more free time Discuss both views.” Introduction: In the busy pace of modern life, many people are facing a difficult choice between money and spare time While a number of individuals believe that having much free time is more important than earning a lot of money, it is widely argued that having more income and less odd times is a better option Now, paraphrase some words in the Introduction above: • Busy = hectic • Facing = dealing • Difficult choice = challenging option • Money = finance • Spare time = free time • A number of individuals = many people • Having much free time = being relaxed • Important = crucial • Earning a lot of money = earning high income  Conclusion: In Conclusion, it is hard to deny that both earning high income and being relaxed after exhausting days of work are crucial in this hectic life c “Some people think that e-books are the death of paper books while others think that paper books will never disappear Discuss both sides and give your opinion.” Introduction: In the era of technology, e-books has being increasingly popular with people While it is widely argued that with the evolution of e-books, traditional paper books are no longer necessary, I am in the opinion that printed books would never be replaced with any other types of materials Now, paraphrase some words in the Introduction above: • Era of technology = modern world • Being increasingly popular = more and more popular • The evolution = the development • Traditional paper books = printed books • Necessary = essential • I am in the opinion = i believe 279 Trung tâm anh ngữ WISE ENGLISH  Conclusion: To sum up, despite the development of technology, I believe that online books cannot take the place of printed ones, even in this modern world d “In some countries the average weight of people is increasing and their level of health and fitness is decreasing What you think are the causes of these problems and what measures could be taken to solve them?” Introduction: Many nations in the world are witnessing an increase in the weight of their citizens which declines the quality of health and fitness This essay will discuss the reasons behind this problem and suggest some possible measures that can be taken to address this issue (Adapted from ieltsband7.com) Now, paraphrase some words in the Introduction above: • Many nations = a lot of countries • Witnessing = experience • An increase = a rise • Citizens = residents • Decline = decrease • Quality of health and fitness = health quality • Reasons = factors • Measures = solutions • Address = deal with  Conclusion To conclude, there are a lot of solutions that countries on the globe can make to deal with the decrease in residents’ health quality e “Some parents buy their children whatever they ask for, and allow their children to whatever they want Is this a good way to raise children? What consequences could this style of parenting have for children as they get older?” Introduction: Nowadays, some parents easily satisfy every demand of their children instead of imposing necessary discipline on them From my perspectives, this way of educating may have many negative impacts on children in the future 280 Trung tâm anh ngữ WISE ENGLISH Now, paraphrase some words in the Introduction above: • Nowadays = these days • Satisfy = give someone whatever they want • Demand = needs • Children = offspring • Imposing necessary discipline on = set rules and boundaries • From my perspectives = in my view • Way of educating = education method  Conclusion: In Conclusion, in my view, although it is tempting to give children whatever they want, parents ought to set rules and boundaries, and to be careful with how they reward them (Adapted from ilts.vn) Fire was invented by pre-historic humans thousands of years ago and it is one of the most important inventions in history It is a fact that smart phone helps us a lot in our daily life The constant robberies of tourists annoy many local people One-third of the population does not have enough to eat However, people now tend to rely a lot on technological inventions, which might make us lazier than ever before New species of insects are discovered by scientists every year Dinosaurs existed millions of years ago There are many reasons why children nowadays are so interested in using social networking sites Evidently, smart phone helps remove the geographical barriers and brings people closer In recent years, a growing number of people have begun to challenge the existing practice of sending criminal to prison They argue that law offenders should be punished to something for the public It is quite natural that people seldom reach a complete agreement on such a controversial issue (books.google.com.vn) 281 Trung tâm anh ngữ WISE ENGLISH To sum up, our customs have values and are an important part of our culture Therefore, I not believe that we should abandon our tradition customs when we move to another country At the same time, I believe that we should learn the customs of the new land we move to and follow those that appeal us In this way, we can remember and celebrate our old culture while adapting to the new one The first factor that can be seen by every people is that a salary should not be so low Most people will be married and have children, so they need a stable income because of their family responsibilities even when they are not satisfied with their jobs In addition, to live a more comfortable life is a part of human nature All these things need a certain amount of money To bring family members closer, people put forward various suggestions Firstly, never bring our work home but leave it in our offices We should spare more time with family members no matter how busy we are Secondly, try to set aside some time for regular family dinners because dinner time is a perfect time and opportunity for people to exchange their feelings and ideas Last but not least, we should teach children a sense of family when they are still young and help them form some good habits like writing letters and making telephone calls to each other (books.google.com.vn) HOMEWORK Write the Introduction and Conclusion for the following topic questions a “’Prevention is better than cure’ Researching and treating diseases is too costly so it would be better to invest in preventative measures To what extent you agree?” Introduction: “Prevention is better than cure” is a controversial topic that raises argument among both authorities and citizens around the world Some people believe that we should focus the investment on medical treatments while many insist that diseases treating are more expensive than preventative methods so the society should spend more money on preventing plans I definitely agree with this point of view Conclusion: In Conclusion, although researching medical treatments is important, developing diseases preventing method should not be underestimated and the government need to invest a big budget on it (testbig.com) 282 Trung tâm anh ngữ WISE ENGLISH b “Some people prefer to devote their whole lives to one company, while others tend to jump from job to job Discuss both views.” Introduction: Opinions differ as to whether it is better to stick to one company, or to change jobs from to time Both views have distinct advantages, but I prefer the second one (Adapted from bereadyielts.com) Conclusion: To conclude, we would prefer to work for different companies that could share us specific advantages to build confidence as well as give us the opportunity to pursue bigger challenges and familiar with diverse kind of industries (ielts-mentor.com) c “Some people think that it is more beneficial to take part in sports which are played in teams, like football, while other people think that taking part in individual sports, like tennis or swimming, is better Discuss both views and give your own opinion.” Introduction: People have different views about which type of sports is better for them to participate in While there are certain benefits of playing team sports, I would argue that taking part in individual sports is a better option Conclusion: In Conclusion, while team sports bring about undeniable benefits, I believe people should devote more of their spare time to playing individual sports (ielts-quangthang.com) d “All over the world, societies are facing a growing problem with obesity This problem affects both children and adults What are the reasons for this rise in obesity? How could it be tackled?” Introduction: In modern life, the problem of obesity upsurges day by day Increasing rate of overweight children and adult is a major issue in some countries, especially developed-countries There are various reasons behind it but in this essay I will try to sum up it into some main causes and give particular way to deal with each reason 283 Trung tâm anh ngữ WISE ENGLISH Conclusion: To conclude, although the problem of obesity is alarming in around the world, there are still effective ways to deal with like some solutions above As long as people have to seriously maintain their healthy diet and spend more time for physical activities (chuawritingmienphi.com) e “The success of a country is often determined by their economic power Is this the most important factor? What other factors should be used to measure a country’s success?” Introduction: The relative success of different countries is usually defined in economic terms There are several other factors, apart from the economy, that could be used to assess a country, and in my opinion education is the most important of all Conclusion: In Conclusion, nations can be assessed and compared in a variety of ways, but I would argue that the standard of a country's education system is the best measure of its success (ielts-simon.com) a Online shopping applications such as Shopee or Tiki help us save time as we not have to go to traditional market as usually we did in the past b Freezing cold weather can be a great joy to some people; however, to others, it is terrible c Native speakers often speak fast, which makes students embarrassed to ask them to repeat d To some students, British food is strange because it may be cooked differently or tasted differently e In my opinion, living in big cities is more advantageous than living in the countryside f Online shopping is increasing in popularity because of its convenience g Efforts to reduce the consequences that are caused by rising temperature should be done in a global scale h Many overseas students find that understanding other students is a bigger problem than understanding their teachers i It is widely believed that learning a foreign language is very important to a child’s early development 284 Trung tâm anh ngữ WISE ENGLISH 1D 2C 3C 4C 5A Animals play an important role in the progress of human beings For instance, such animals as monkeys or rabbits are used in medical researches Animal testing has dramatically improved the health of human beings Without animal testing, many patients would suffer from and even die of their diseases However, despite these benefits, I believe that animals should not be used for testing medical techniques and drugs Second, not all experiments are necessary Nowadays, animals are used in too many experiments Some diseases are not common ones and will not lead to peoples’ death Furthermore, with the fast development of science and technology, other alternatives have been found to replace animal testing For example, computer simulation can achieve similar results Constantly listening and speaking in a foreign language is tiring Although you may have learned English very thoroughly, it is possible that the regional accents you discover when you arrive in UK make the language harder to understand than you thought People may also speak quicker and you may feel too embarrassed at asking them to repeat what they have said (issuu.com) Our planet gives us everything we need, but natural resources are not endless Strip mining devastates the whole regional environment, leaving bare and useless ground Deforestation removes old trees that cannot be replaced Too much fishing may reduce fish populations to the point where they cannot recover We are too careless when taking what we want without giving anything back (ilearning.fltrp.com) 285 SỨ MỆNH Giúp bạn trẻ Việt Nam THAY ĐỔI phương pháp học tiếng Anh theo TƯ DUY NÃO BỘ (NLP) NGÔN NGỮ để chinh phục ngôn ngữ cách NHANH NHẤT HIỆU QUẢ NHẤT “Study Smarter, Not Harder” PHƯƠNG PHÁP HỌC Dựa nguyên tắc tảng Khoa học Tư Não (Neuro-Linguistic Programming) Khoa học Ngôn ngữ (Linguistics) Thank Thank you you CÔNG TY TNHH TƯ VẤN VÀ GIÁO DỤC WISE Cơ sở: 146 Hàm Nghi - Đà Nẵng | Hotline: (+84) 901 270 888 Cơ sở: 514 Hoàng Diệu - Đà Nẵng | Hotline: (+84) 901 290 777 E-mail: admin@wiseenglish.com | Web: www.wiseenglish.vn Fanpage: fb.com/wiseenglish.vn | SĐT: (+84) 2366 566 777