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VIETNAM NATIONAL UNIVERSITY, HANOI UNIVERSITY OF LANGUAGE AND INTERNATIONAL STUDIES FACULTY OF POSTGRADUATE STUDIES LÊ THỊ NHUNG EQUIVALENCE OF ENGLISH – VIETNAMESE TRANSLATION FOR SUBTITLES OF SOME DOCUMENTARY FILMS (NGHIÊN CỨU TƯƠNG ĐƯƠNG DỊCH THUẬT ANH – VIỆT TRÊN PHỤ ĐỀ CỦA MỘT SỐ PHIM TÀI LIỆU) \ M.A THESIS (Minor Programme Thesis) Field: English Linguistics Code: 602215 HÀ NỘI,2011 TIEU LUAN MOI download : skknchat@gmail.com VIETNAM NATIONAL UNIVERSITY, HANOI UNIVERSITY OF LANGUAGE AND INTERNATIONAL STUDIES FACULTY OF POSTGRADUATE STUDIES LÊ THỊ NHUNG EQUIVALENCE OF ENGLISH – VIETNAMESE TRANSLATION FOR SUBTITLES OF SOME DOCUMENTARY FILMS (NGHIÊN CỨU TƯƠNG ĐƯƠNG DỊ CH THUẬT ANH – VIỆT TRÊN PHỤ ĐỀ CỦA MỘT SỐ PHIM TÀI LIỆU) \ M.A THESIS (Minor Programme Thesis) Field: English Linguistics Code: 602215 Supervisor: Associate Professor, Dr Lê Hùng Tiến HÀ NỘI,2011 TIEU LUAN MOI download : skknchat@gmail.com iv TABLE OF CONTENTS PART I- INTRODUCTION 1 Rationale .1 Aims of the study Scope and method of the study .2 Organization of the study PART II-DEVELOPMENT CHAPTER I: LITERATURE REVIEW Film and subtitle translation 1.1 Definition of translation 1.2 Translation of dramas/films 1.3 Subtitle translation 1.4 Subtitle Quality 10 Terminology and translation of terminology 11 2.1 Definition and features 11 2.2 Terminology in translation 12 Baker’s approach to equivalence .13 3.1 Equivalence and equivalence at word level 13 3.2 Problems of non-equivalence and strategy .15 CHAPTER II: TRANSLATION AND SUBTITLING OF THE SELECTED SERIES .19 Synopsis of the series “Swam loggers” .19 Linguistic features in the relationship with subtitles translation 20 Problems of non-equivalence 22 Strategy to deal with non-equivalence 24 4.1 Different equivalence to a source word as a method of subtitles shortening 24 TIEU LUAN MOI download : skknchat@gmail.com v 4.2 Equivalence of logging machines and equipments 29 4.3 Equivalence of logging activities and environment 32 Concluding remarks 34 PART III: CONCLUSION .36 Addressed issues and some applications .36 Suggestions for further study 37 REFERENCES 38 APPENDIX I Qnet instruction to subtitle translate I Sample of “Swam loggers” scripts V Sample of “Swam logger” subtitles XXXVIII TIEU LUAN MOI download : skknchat@gmail.com ABSTRACT The study investigates the equivalence for terminology in subtitles translation of the documentary series “Swamp loggers” broadcasted on Discovery Channel The Introduction gives a rationale for the study and sets up the aims, scope, structure and methods of the study Chapter I constitutes the study’s theoretical background It presents the issues relevant to the paper’s topic: Translation, translation of drama and film, terminology in translation, translation equivalence and non-equivalence and some strategies Chapter II presents the translation of the selected series with the introduction to the series, the problems of non-equivalence and explains how these problems are solved by translators’ using the strategies suggested in Chapter I TIEU LUAN MOI download : skknchat@gmail.com PART I- INTRODUCTION Rationale Translation is recently considered a language skill – the fifth macro skill Besides translation of television programs and motion pictures, especially subtitling, in which the text appears on the screen along with dialogue of the film is more and more popular It is hoped that this research will make a small but critical contribution to the development of new theoretical foundation of subtitling in Vietnam Aims of the study This study will seek to answer the research question: "How equivalence in translation between English and Vietnamese is achieved through the Vietnamese subtitling of the documentary series “Swamp loggers” shown on Discovery Channel in association with Vietnamese Cable Television?" Scope and method of the study The study focuses mainly on equivalence for terminology achieved in the subtitles of the documentary series “Swam loggers” The evaluation of equivalence will be based on the approach suggested by Baker (1992) using a list of the two texts: the source text and the translated version Organization of the study The study consists of three parts: Part I is the Introduction which describes the reasons for the choice of the topic, the aims, the scope, method and organization of the study Part II is the Development with Chapter I providing the literature review of translation, terminology and equivalence; Chapter II giving the synopsis as well as subtitling of the selected series; the problems of non-equivalence and subtitlers’ strategies to deal with those problems Part III is the Conclusion and suggestion for further study TIEU LUAN MOI download : skknchat@gmail.com PART II-DEVELOPMENT CHAPTER I: LITERATURE REVIEW Film and subtitle translation 1.1 Definition of translation Translation is a variedly defined concept that has caused vigorous debate along its development history Finding the closet equivalence while maintaining “style” and “meaning” as authentic as possible determines the authenticity of the translation in grammar, culture, comprehension, and message content To have a deeper investigation into equivalence, film subtitles translation will be discussed in this research paper 1.2 Translation of dramas/films Translators of drama have discomfort in having dramatic text, with emphasis on verbs, rather than that of more descriptive and explanatory Therefore a translation of a drama must be concise – it must not be an over-translation 1.3 Subtitle translation Subtitles, according to Baker, M (Ed.) (1998) are “transcriptions of film or TV dialogue, presented simultaneously on the screen.” She also highlights the “authenticity” gained in subtitles, which includes the real voice quality and intonation of the actors A more detailed view of subtitling in Vietnam can be seen in Appendix I – Subtitling instruction by Qnet Entertainment 1.4 Subtitle Quality According to James (2001), subtitles quality is to meet clients’ expectation “Clients” here are the producer,the author/scripts writer expects his or her intention to be reflected accurately and authentically” in the translated subtitles (James 2001:152) Accuracy, clearness, credibility and consistency with the action on the screen are what to expect in subtitles Moreover, subtitles are evaluated by the quality of translation and quality of typo accuracy TIEU LUAN MOI download : skknchat@gmail.com Terminology and translation of terminology 2.1 Definition and features The distinction between words and terms are not fixed Each term constantly interacts and intersects with general words because they consist of the same linguistic forms 2.2 Terminology in translation Newmark (1988) considers new terminology as the central difficulty in technical translation While Baker (1998) places translation and terminology in two different linguistic and cognitive tables with differently focused areas of language study Baker (1998) argues that finding the terms which has the same concept in two languages does not require translators’ minimal theory of terminology Baker’s approach to equivalence 3.1 Equivalence and equivalence at word level In the most general meaning, equivalence is the relationship between a source text (ST) and a target text (TT) that allows the TT to be considered as a translation of the ST Baker uses notion of equivalence “for the sake of convenience – because most translators are used to it rather than because it has any theoretical status” (1992:5-6) She also points out the three following types of equivalence: a) Grammatical equivalence b) Textual equivalence c) Pragmatic equivalence Baker also acknowledges that equivalence at word level is the first element to be taken into consideration by translators 3.2 Problems of non-equivalence and strategy Baker (1992) also points out 11 common problems of non-equivalence at word level: - Culture-specific concepts - The source-language concepts are not lexicalized in the target language TIEU LUAN MOI download : skknchat@gmail.com - The source-language word is semantically complex - The source and target languages make different distinctions in meaning - The target language lacks a super-ordinate - The target language lacks a specific term (hyponym) - Differences in physical or interpersonal perspective - Differences in expressive meaning - Differences in form - Differences in frequency and purpose of using specific forms - The use of loan words in the source text She also figures out strategy by professional translators as: a Translation by a more general word b Translation by a more neutral/less expressive word c Translation by cultural substitution d Translation by a paraphrase e Translation by omission In short, all above translation theories will make a steady background for the study’s development for further investigation in the next parts CHAPTER II: TRANSLATION AND SUBTITLING OF THE SELECTED SERIES Synopsis of the series “Swam loggers” “Swamp loggers” is a reality television show made by Discovery Channel The show tells a story about the working and social life of loggers in North Carolina swamps with hardship, dangers and joy and TIEU LUAN MOI download : skknchat@gmail.com special experiences Logging itself is a tough job; logging in swamps, especially swamps with no bottom in North Carolina The main characters are Goodson’s All Terrain Logging Company, with the fourth generation logger and also the owner of the company, Bobby Goodson, his son, Justin Goodson – the foreman and the united logging team: the loader Dave Muller and the veteran logger – Simitrio Linguistic features in the relationship with subtitles translation In the selected documentaries, it is possible to divide the language into two forms, which is narrating and speaking/talking Narrating voices often tell the story which is going on, while characters’ voices, on the other hands, are used to express the characters themselves Problems of non-equivalence - Different distinction in meaning - Semantic complexion - Target language lacks a specific term - Word form difference - Cultural specific term Strategy to deal with non-equivalence 4.1 Different equivalence to a source word as a method of subtitles shortening “Haul” is used in both noun and verb form and translated differently in different cases: But we're glad we're back We got plenty Thật vui quay lại wood to haul… Có nhiều gỗ cần kéo Every hour that Simitrio isn't cutting wood Mỗi Simitrio không xẻ gỗ means the truckers will catch up to him and có nghĩa lái xe tải bắt kịp have nothing left to haul hết gỗ để chuyển Trucker Wayne Sauers has just returned Lái xe Wayne Sauers vừa from the pulp mill, quay từ nhà máy giấy TIEU LUAN MOI download : skknchat@gmail.com after his latest haul sau chuyến xe vừa Together, they risk it all as they cut, load, Họ mạo hiểm xẻ, chất lên xe, and haul over 100,000 tons of timber each chở 100.000 gỗ năm year Harrison (2010) Similarly, in another case, the word “tract” is differently translated in different context: Good tract of wood Corbett, actually they gave us a really good tract Họ giao cho khoảnh rừng Corbett tốt It's actually not near as wet as a lot of the tracts that we used to cut Nó khơng gần đầm lầy nhiều nơi chúng tơi đốn The tract runs up against the Cape Fear River, Chỗ chạy ngược sông Cape Fear and years ago, the Cape Fear would flood every winter … I'm glad you got us on this good tract Harrison (2010) Vài năm trước sông gây ngập mùa đông, Thật vui anh giao khoảnh tốt As for the listed words with semantic complexity as “shovel logging”, “shovel road”, drag racing”, one way is not sutbtilers’ choice of solution This weekend will mark her drag racing debut And to give her a fighting chance at a win, Cuối tuần chị thi husband, Buddy, is making sure everything is shipshape in her 355 small block, Chevy pickup truck Buddy kiểm tra lại để đảm bảo để có hội chiến thắng, Chevy mui trần tốt Harrison (2010) Along the line, “shovel logging” and “shovel road” will be discussed: Shovel logging is different than conventional logging Đốn gỗ máy khác cách truyền thống We actually use the trees Chúng dùng gỗ TIEU LUAN MOI download : skknchat@gmail.com Simitrio will cut them, laying them in front of him Simitrio đốn đặt chúng nằm phía trước, And then he'll take the other trees in there and overlap them It actually makes a grid lấy khác chồng lên tạo mạng lưới, And what that does, it keeps the tract dirt above the giữ đất bên mud instead of running through the mud thay chảy qua bùn Harrison (2010) “Shovel logging”, as explained before, is logging by gradually dragging and swinging logs/trees to forest road, which cannot be fully and accurately expressed by “Đốn gỗ máy” The suggested term can be “đốn gỗ đầm lầy” to ensure time and word restriction in this subtitles Even though this tract is dryer than most, Dù khoảnh rừng khô nơi khác, Bobby's heavy equipment still needs support thiết bị hạng nặng Bobby in this swampy terrain cần vật đỡ nơi lầy lội Simitrio began felling trees a week earlier, Simitrio bắt đầu đốn tuần trước, so that he and the shovel loader could build để anh máy bốc xếp the log road, làm đường gỗ, known as the shovel road, gọi đường bốc xếp, the first step in logging any new site bước để đốn gỗ Harrison (2010) địa điểm In short, for one word in the source language, different equivalence with different expressive meaning is produced in the target language to fit with different situation in subtitling TIEU LUAN MOI download : skknchat@gmail.com 4.2 Equivalence of logging machines and equipments Cutter Máy xẻ Trailer Xe moóc Tractor Máy kéo Loader Máy bốc xếp Dozer/bulldozer Xe ủi đất Shovel/shovel loader/shovel machine Máy xúc Feller buncher/feller Máy xẻ Skidder/ clambunk skidder Máy kéo gỗ Stacker Máy xếp It is not difficult to identify the linguistic structure of these terms, which is “V + er in English” and “Máy + function” in Vietnamese However, the unsolved problems stay still where there are different machines assigned to one task such as “cutter” and “feller buncher” above or “clambunk skidder” and “Bogey skidder” The situation seems to be much more relaxing for the subtilers to deal with general terminology: Pick-up Xe bán tải Lowboy Xe tải sàn thấp Springs Lò xo Axles Dump truck Trục Xe chở vật liệu Crane Cần cẩu Pile Chồng (gỗ) Teeth/carbide teeth Carbide Răng/răng các-bua Các-bua Pneumatic ratchet Chốt khí nén holder Mâm cặp disk Đĩa yoke Vòng đai Figure 1: Equivalence for General Terminology 4.3 Equivalence of logging activities and environment Terminology Quota Equivalence Hạn mức/hạn ngạch Short form (if any) Hạn TIEU LUAN MOI download : skknchat@gmail.com 10 Truckload Load Haul Swampland Stuck Tract Wet Chuyến xe Chuyến/Chở/Chất gỗ Kéo/Chuyển/Chuyến xe/Chở Vùng đầm lầy Sa lầy Khu gỗ/Khoảnh rừng Lầy lội Chuyến Quality pulpwood Gỗ giấy chất lượng cao Gỗ Paper mill/mill Nhà máy giấy Figure 2: Equivalence for logging activities and environment Đầm Khu Nhà máy Come to the wood names, a cultural substitution as suggested by Baker (1992) Risky as it is, the substitution turns out to be fairly appropriate to subtitles translation Cypress Gỗ bách/Cây bách Bald cypress Cây bách gỗ đặc Mockernut hickory Cây/Gỗ hồ đào đầm lầy Pig nut hickory Cây/Gỗ hồ đào trắng Hickory Cây/Gỗ hồ đào Ash tree Cây/Gỗ tần bì Tupelo Figure 3: Equivalence for Wood Names Cây/Gỗ keo These equivalences are not necessarily true to every situation where such cultural concepts appear It is required that all the concepts are left untranslated Therefore, Vietnamese terms tend to be used to fill in the gap, not to transfer the meaning Concluding remarks The study identifies three groups of equivalence with nine sub-groups achieved in Vietnamese subtitles of the series “Swamp loggers”, which are: Equivalence of words with meaning complexity a Unlexicalized concepts b Semantically complexity c Different distinction in meaning TIEU LUAN MOI download : skknchat@gmail.com 11 d Lack of specific term/super-ordinate e Different in form Equivalence of words with technical complexity a Equivalence of logging machines and equipment b Equivalence of logging activities and environment c Equivalence of wood names To satisfactorily solve the above problems, which is establishing equivalence for these terminology, translators/subtitlers flexibly apply Baker (1992)’s strategies in each different situation PART III: CONCLUSION Addressed issues and some applications It can be said that translators/subtitlers working on the series use various strategies, from the most common to the risky one, to deal with problems of non-equivalence as suggested by Baker (1992) Not all of the equivalence meets the translator/interpreter’s expectation, however, from subtilers’ point of view, the equivalence achieved in subtitles of “Swam loggers” is clear and credible, and gives the impression of being part of the action on the screen However, shortcomings of the study are unavoidable, for which the author would like to appreciate readers’ tolerance Suggestions for further study The research author is fully aware that this study is far from being satisfisfactory and other issues should be taken into consideration so that it can possibly draw out an overall conclusion of equivalence in subtitles translation The following topics can be considered for further studies: - Equivalence above word level in subtitles translation - Types of terminology in finding equivalence for subtitles translation TIEU LUAN MOI download : skknchat@gmail.com ... of equivalence in subtitles translation The following topics can be considered for further studies: - Equivalence above word level in subtitles translation - Types of terminology in finding equivalence. .. with subtitles translation 20 Problems of non -equivalence 22 Strategy to deal with non -equivalence 24 4.1 Different equivalence to a source word as a method of subtitles. .. of non -equivalence - Different distinction in meaning - Semantic complexion - Target language lacks a specific term - Word form difference - Cultural specific term Strategy to deal with non-equivalence