The implementation of peer corrective feedback in teaching english speaking skills for young learners at a chau english center m a

VIETNAM NATIONAL UNIVERSITY – HO CHI MINH CITY UNIVERSITY OF SOCIAL SCIENCES & HUMANITIES FACULTY OF ENGLISH LINGUISTICS AND LITERATURE THE IMPLEMENTATION OF PEER CORRECTIVE FEEDBACK IN TEACHING ENGLISH SPEAKING SKILLS FOR YOUNG LEARNERS AT A CHAU ENGLISH CENTER A thesis submitted to the Faculty of English Linguistics & Literature in partial fulfillment of the Master‟s degree in TESOL By NGO THI DUONG Supervised by DOAN HUE DUNG, Ph.D HO CHI MINH CITY, AUGUST 2022 ACKNOWLEDGEMENT No words can express my very great appreciation to many influential people for their support in the journey of thesis completion I am especially indebted to my supervisor, Dr Doan Hue Dung, who was patient and generously provided valuable feedback on my paper Without her timely advice and constructive instruction it would not have been possible to complete this study I would like to extend my sincere thanks to my family, who are always by my side anytime I need, especially when I was in troubles Thanks should also go to my beloved mother, oldest sister, who always advocate and encourage me in everything Special thanks to my husband, who always motivate and takes care of me during the process of MA course Lastly, I would like to mention the permission of the research site and participants to carry the study at the center They was so considerate and supportive when cooperating with me to accomplish this project II STATEMENT OF ORIGINALITY I certify that this thesis entitled “THE IMPLEMENTATION OF PEER CORRECTIVE FEEDBACK IN TEACHING ENGLISH SPEAKING SKILLS FOR YOUNG LEARNERS AT A CHAU ENGLISH CENTER” is my own work The thesis has not been submitted for the award of any degree or diploma in any other institution Ho Chi Minh City, August 2022 Ngô Thị Dưỡng III RETENTION OF USE I hereby state that I, Ngô Thị Dưỡng, being the candidate for the degree of Master in TESOL, accept the requirements of the University relating to the retention and use of Master‟s Thesis deposited in the Library In terms of these conditions, I agree that the original of my thesis deposited in the Library should be accessible for the purpose of study and research in accordance with the normal conditions established by the Library for the care, loan or reproduction of the theses Ho Chi Minh City, August 2022 IV TABLE OF CONTENTS ACKNOWLEDGEMENT II STATEMENT OF ORIGINALITY III RETENTION OF USE IV TABLE OF CONTENTS .V LIST OF ABBREVIATIONS VII LIST OF TABLES .VIII LIST OF FIGURES AND CHARTS IX ABSTRACT X CHAPTER INTRODUCTION 1.1 Background to the study 1.2 Aims of the study 1.2.1 Statement of the problem 1.2.2 Rationale of the study 1.2.3 Research questions 1.4 Significance of the study 1.5 Scope of the study 1.6 Organization of thesis chapters CHAPTER LITERATURE REVIEW 2.1 Young learners (YLs) 2.1.1 Defining the ages of YLs 2.1.2 Defining the characteristics of YLs 2.1.3 Defining YLs‟ attitudes towards language learning 2.2 The concept of peer corrective feedback 2.2.1 Feedback 2.2.2 Peer feedback 2.2.3 Corrective feedback (CF) 10 2.2.3.1 Defining CF 10 2.2.3.2 Types of CF 12 2.2.4 Peer corrective feedback (PCF) 14 2.3 Speaking skills 16 2.3.1 Definitions of speaking 16 2.3.2 Activities in English speaking classes (ESC) for YLs 17 2.3.3 Assessment of YLs‟ oral performances 18 2.4 Previous studies on PCF 19 2.5 Conceptual framework 21 CHAPTER METHODOLOGY 23 3.1 Research questions 23 3.2 Research Design 23 V 3.3 Context of the study 24 3.4 Participants and sampling procedures 26 3.5 AR cycles 27 3.6 Methods of data collection 28 3.6.1 Observations 28 3.6.2 Questionnaires 29 3.6.3 Private documents 30 3.7 Data collection procedure 31 3.8 Data Analysis 35 3.8.1 Data analysis approach 35 3.8.2 Data analysis process 35 3.8.3 Data analysis scheme 36 CHAPTER FINDINGS AND DISCUSSION 38 4.1 Findings 38 4.1.1 Implementation of PCF in ESC 38 4.1.1.1 Teacher‟s implementation of CF 38 4.1.1.2 The students‟ use of PCF 42 4.1.2 The students‟ attitudes towards PCF 46 4.1.2.1 The students‟ attitudes towards the teacher implementing PCF 46 4.1.2.2 The students‟ attitudes towards the classroom atmosphere with PCF 50 4.1.2.3 The students‟ attitudes towards giving and receiving PCF 53 4.1.2.4 The students‟ attitudes towards ESC with PCF 54 4.2 Discussion 56 CHAPTER CONCLUSION 60 5.1 Summary of findings 60 5.2 Implications 61 5.2.1 For teaching 61 5.2.1 For learning 63 5.2 Limitations of the study 63 5.2 Recommendations for further study 64 REFERENCES 65 APPENDICES 72 APPENDIX A 72 APPENDIX B 79 APPENDIX C 86 APPENDIX D 87 APPENDIX E 88 APPENDIX F 94 VI C.33.44.55.54.78.65.5.43.22.2.4 22.Tai lieu Luan 66.55.77.99 van Luan an.77.99.44.45.67.22.55.77.C.37.99.44.45.67.22.55.77.C.37.99.44.45.67.22.55.77.C.37.99.44.45.67.22.55.77.C.33.44.55.54.78.655.43.22.2.4.55.22 Do an.Tai lieu Luan van Luan an Do an.Tai lieu Luan van Luan an Do an LIST OF ABBREVIATIONS PCF Peer corrective feedback PF Peer feedback CF Corrective feedback YLs Young learners ELT English language teaching ESS English speaking skills ESC English speaking classes EFL English as a foreign language ESL English as a second language CLT Communicative language teaching Stt.010.Mssv.BKD002ac.email.ninhd 77.99.44.45.67.22.55.77.C.37.99.44.45.67.22.55.77.77.99.44.45.67.22.55.77.C.37.99.44.45.67.22.55.77.77.99.44.45.67.22.55.77.C.37.99.44.45.67.22.55.77.77.99.44.45.67.22.55.77.C.37.99.44.45.67.22.55.77.77.99.44.45.67.22.55.77.C.37.99.44.45.67.22.55.77.77.99.44.45.67.22.55.77.C.37.99.44.45.67.22.55.77t@edu.gmail.com.vn.bkc19134.hmu.edu.vn.Stt.010.Mssv.BKD002ac.email.ninhddtt@edu.gmail.com.vn.bkc19134.hmu.edu.vn VII C.33.44.55.54.78.65.5.43.22.2.4 22.Tai lieu Luan 66.55.77.99 van Luan an.77.99.44.45.67.22.55.77.C.37.99.44.45.67.22.55.77.C.37.99.44.45.67.22.55.77.C.37.99.44.45.67.22.55.77.C.33.44.55.54.78.655.43.22.2.4.55.22 Do an.Tai lieu Luan van Luan an Do an.Tai lieu Luan van Luan an Do an LIST OF TABLES Table 2.1 Checklist of guideline in using CF 11 Table 2.2 A summary of types of CF 12 Table 2.3 PCF procedure 15 Table 3.1 Levels and English speaking learning outcomes for YLs 25 Table 3.2 Information of participants 26 Table 3.3 Items of the questionnaires 30 Table 3.4 A description of Pilot 32 Table 3.5 A description of Cycle 33 Table 3.6 A description of Pilot 34 Table 3.7 A description of Cycle 34 Table 4.1 Number of the teacher's CF 39 Table 4.2 Speaking evaluation criteria 40 Table 4.3 Number of the students' PCF 43 Table 4.4 The students' feeling towards teacher‟s activities before speaking47 Table 4.5 The students' feelings towards teacher‟s activities while speaking49 Table 4.6 The students‟ feelings towards the teacher‟s activities after speaking 50 Table 4.7 The students‟ feelings towards classrom atmosphere 51 Table 4.8 The students‟ feelings towards providing and receiving PCF 53 Stt.010.Mssv.BKD002ac.email.ninhd 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students‟ attitudes toward English speaking classes with PCF55 Stt.010.Mssv.BKD002ac.email.ninhd 77.99.44.45.67.22.55.77.C.37.99.44.45.67.22.55.77.77.99.44.45.67.22.55.77.C.37.99.44.45.67.22.55.77.77.99.44.45.67.22.55.77.C.37.99.44.45.67.22.55.77.77.99.44.45.67.22.55.77.C.37.99.44.45.67.22.55.77.77.99.44.45.67.22.55.77.C.37.99.44.45.67.22.55.77.77.99.44.45.67.22.55.77.C.37.99.44.45.67.22.55.77t@edu.gmail.com.vn.bkc19134.hmu.edu.vn.Stt.010.Mssv.BKD002ac.email.ninhddtt@edu.gmail.com.vn.bkc19134.hmu.edu.vn IX C.33.44.55.54.78.65.5.43.22.2.4 22.Tai lieu Luan 66.55.77.99 van Luan an.77.99.44.45.67.22.55.77.C.37.99.44.45.67.22.55.77.C.37.99.44.45.67.22.55.77.C.37.99.44.45.67.22.55.77.C.33.44.55.54.78.655.43.22.2.4.55.22 Do an.Tai lieu Luan van Luan an Do an.Tai lieu Luan van Luan an Do an ABSTRACT Peer corrective feedback (PCF) is considered as one of the effective techniques to foster young learners of English to talk in class through the process of thinking, discussing, and providing feedback Considering that, this study examined the implementation of PCF for YLs in English speaking classes (ESC) This research aims to explore the most common types of PCF in ESC and YLs‟ attitudes towards PCF The researcher as the head teacher employed the mixed methods approach in an action research design to understand her learners as well as reflect her own teaching for further improvement Questionnaires and observations were the main means of data collection in the two research cycles (C1 and C2) Besides, in the two pilot cycles (P1 and P2), private documents including speaking evaluation rubric and comment sheets were applied to train the students the required criteria of speaking performances and note-taking skill which were useful when the students orally provided PCF The analysis disclosed that regardless of the anxiety of some participants, majority of the students had positive attitudes towards the implementation of PCF because they found this technique quite useful for them to improve their speaking skills It also indicated that most types of PCF were used in the ESC by both teacher and the students Prominently, while the teacher preferred to implement clarification requests for more details of PCF, the students had a desire of exercising recasts to deliver their correction Key words: peer corrective feedback, English speaking skills, young learners Stt.010.Mssv.BKD002ac.email.ninhd 77.99.44.45.67.22.55.77.C.37.99.44.45.67.22.55.77.77.99.44.45.67.22.55.77.C.37.99.44.45.67.22.55.77.77.99.44.45.67.22.55.77.C.37.99.44.45.67.22.55.77.77.99.44.45.67.22.55.77.C.37.99.44.45.67.22.55.77.77.99.44.45.67.22.55.77.C.37.99.44.45.67.22.55.77.77.99.44.45.67.22.55.77.C.37.99.44.45.67.22.55.77t@edu.gmail.com.vn.bkc19134.hmu.edu.vn.Stt.010.Mssv.BKD002ac.email.ninhddtt@edu.gmail.com.vn.bkc19134.hmu.edu.vn X C.33.44.55.54.78.65.5.43.22.2.4 22.Tai lieu Luan 66.55.77.99 van Luan 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Conclusion Eye contact Interaction Tương tác Response to nói questions Hand gestures Expression Happy face Biểu đạt expression Total Strengths Suggestions Adapted from Hung, Y., Samuelson, B.L and Chen, S (2016) Relationships between Peer- and Self- Assessment and Teacher Assessment of Young EFL Learners‟ Oral Presentations In Nikolov, M (Ed.) 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Dan: Ừ, thơi! Teacher: OK munites for you to write comments for your friends Class: (Tập trung viết comment) Diana: (Tập trung viết) pronunciation Oh my god! Ms Con chấm fair Teacher: (mời số bạn đưa nhận xét) Cindy, please Cindy: Hello everyone! My name;s Cindy (hơi nhão nhấn nhá quá, cười cười) Diana: Nghiêm túc, please Cindy: OK! (tiếp tục nói) “I have a birthday party We ate a cake and drink and say We can ate a pizza Mom and dad and brother gave me present and I have a five present, Dad, mom, Thank you!” Class: (Im lặng, tập trung ghi chú, chấm điểm, nhận xét) Tony looks at Ariana's paper to looks for examples of comments Daisy looks at Mary's paper to find help Diana: Thank you! Good job! Teacher: OK, class! You have minutes to write down feedback Class: (Sau Cyndy kết thúc phần nói, lớp bắt đầu trao đổi với bạn để xem phần nhận xét cảu bạn có giống không?) Diana: (xung phong nhận xét) cử tay khơng có, biểu đạt khn mặt khơng có Sans asks Mary many times for some questions, but no reply because Mary is busy to talk with Daisy Diana: Nãy chưa có excellent hết trơn á! Ariana: Phốt chưa Ms? Diana: Từ từ man, phốt quài! Teacher: Được Các em đưa nhận xét nào! Ariana: For Dan! T: For Dan, ok! Ariana: Dan đọc to Teacher: speak loudly? 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Ariana: Yes, nhƣng nội dung chƣa rõ ràng Teachher: ohhh, the content is not very clear Diana: Oh, ghi khơng có rõ ràng Diana: Con ghi chƣa rõ mục đích Ariana: chƣa lƣu lốt Teacher: Oh, not fluently! Ariana: Kết thúc Dan ngắn chƣa có đạt Teacher: So what is the full? Ariana: Là Ms? Teacher: What is the long: If it is short so what is the long one? Ariana: Dan thể bạn nói It's was fun I love my party để lại kỷ niệm Teacher: OK, YES Ariana: Nó giống nhƣ mở bài, kết thúc văn ý Teacher: That's right! Ariana: Yes Dans sử dụng từ vựng Teacher: Just some vocabulary! Ariana: Yes Ngữ pháp, lúc ổn lúc chƣa? Teacher: What is ổn? What is chƣa? Ariana: Trời ơi! (laughing) ln Ms? Diana: Vì bà phốt người ta Ms phốt lại Ariana: Phát âm chƣa ổn Teacher: Đang nói ngữ pháp mà chuyển sang phát âm Ariana: Bởi quên tiêu ngữ pháp Teacher: OK! Good! Ariana: Phát âm chƣa chuẩn Có số từ Teacher: What are those? Ariana: ví dụ từ pirthday Teacher: Birthday? Ariana: Yes Bạn nói thiếu chữ th Teacher: Thanh can you hear? Dan: (Listen to the comments so pateintly) Jackson: (hỏi Dan để đưa feedback) Ariana: OK Đƣợc Ms Teacher: Ok Who else? Ariana: A khoan, Ms Còn Ngữ điệu Dan Cái cách đọc chƣa hay Stt.010.Mssv.BKD002ac.email.ninhd 77.99.44.45.67.22.55.77.C.37.99.44.45.67.22.55.77.77.99.44.45.67.22.55.77.C.37.99.44.45.67.22.55.77.77.99.44.45.67.22.55.77.C.37.99.44.45.67.22.55.77.77.99.44.45.67.22.55.77.C.37.99.44.45.67.22.55.77.77.99.44.45.67.22.55.77.C.37.99.44.45.67.22.55.77.77.99.44.45.67.22.55.77.C.37.99.44.45.67.22.55.77t@edu.gmail.com.vn.bkc19134.hmu.edu.vn.Stt.010.Mssv.BKD002ac.email.ninhddtt@edu.gmail.com.vn.bkc19134.hmu.edu.vn 89 C.33.44.55.54.78.65.5.43.22.2.4 22.Tai lieu Luan 66.55.77.99 van Luan an.77.99.44.45.67.22.55.77.C.37.99.44.45.67.22.55.77.C.37.99.44.45.67.22.55.77.C.37.99.44.45.67.22.55.77.C.33.44.55.54.78.655.43.22.2.4.55.22 Do an.Tai lieu Luan van Luan an Do an.Tai lieu Luan van Luan an Do an Teacher: The intonation is not so good? Ariana: Nó bằng khơng hạnh phúc vui sƣớng gì (Tina seems bored and sleepy while listening to comments may be becasue she is tired.) Teacher: OK What's else? Ariana: Rồi Cindy Teacher: Another? Do you want to talk about Dan? Class: No (lắc đầu) Mary: unclear! Teacher: What is unclear? Mary: Um giống nhƣ phần nở đầu Teacher: The opening? So what is the opening? Mary: Hello My name is Mary! hết! T: OK About Chi, please! Class: Me… (có nhiều bạn giơ tay nhận xét) Ariana: Me (loudly) Diana: Thánh phốt lớp Ms Teacher: Yes, please! Ariana: Cindy, lúc lên khơng có nghiêm túc Phát âm Chi chƣa có ổn? Teacher: What? Which? Ariana: Một số từ mà Cindy đọc waz có chữ z Ms, Teacher: Wazzz? Ariana: Vâng Ngữ điệu Cindy bình bình nhƣ Dan Mở đầu Cindy khơng phát triển Cứ Hello My name is giống nhƣ Dan: Ms Ms What is BÌNH BÌNH? T: It means you don't raise your voice up and down, up and down, up and down! Dan: Yes (Thái độ không thoải mái, không đồng ý với comment ấy) Ariana: Thông tin khơng có rõ ràng Diana: Are you sure? Ariana: Yes! Diana: No, em không thấy dậy! Teacher! 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Dan: Yeah! That's it! Teacher: Ok munites for you to give comments for your friends Class: (continue writing comments) Diana: (focus on writing a lot of comments) pronunciation, … Oh my god! Ms gave “fair” for him Class: (some students are volunteering to present the topic) Teacher: Cindy, please Cindy: Hello everyone! My name Cindy (a bit flabby and a bit too much nahs, laugh) Diana: Seriously, please Cindy: OK (seriously speak) “I have a birthday party We ate a cake and drink and drunk We can ate a pizza Mom and da and brother gave me present and I have a five present, Dad, mom, Thank you!” Class: (Be quiet, focus notes, grade, comment) (Tony looks at Ariana's paper to looks for examples of comments) Daisy looks at Mary's paper to find help Diana: Thank you! Good job! Teacher: Ok, class! You have minutes to write down your feedback Class: (After Cindy finish, class start talking with their partners loudly to find the similarities and differences in commenting) Diana: Dan had no hand gestures No facial expression (Sans is asking Mary many times some questions, but no replies because Mary is busy to talk with Daisy) Diana: No one has been excellent! Ariana: Can I give comments now, Ms? Diana: Slow down, man! Teacher: OK Give some comments, please Ariana: For Dan! Teacher: For Dan, ok! 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I thought that the purpose is unclear Ariana: not very fluent! Teacher: Oh, He didn’t speak fluently Ariana: Dan's ending is too short T: So what is the full? Ariana: What? Ms.? Teacher: What is the long? If it is short so what is the long one? Ariana: Dan can say “It's was fun I love my party because it save some memories” Teacher: OK, YES.! Ariana: It's like the opening of an essay! Teacher: That's right! Ariana: Yes Dans use few words! Teacher: Just some vocabulary? Ariana: Yes The grammar is sometimes okay, sometimes not? Teacher: What is ỔN? What is CHƢA? (kidding) Ariana: Oh my god! (laughing) Is it ok, Ms? Diana: Because you comment on a lot of mistakes Ariana: Pronunciation is not good! T: I'm speaking grammar, but I've switched to pronunciation Ariana: Because I forgot about his grammar mistakes T: It’s OK! Good! Ariana: The pronunciation is incorrect Some words like… T: Like what? Ariana: For example, pirthday! T: Birthday? Ariana: Yes The sound of “th” is missing T: Can you hear, Dan? Dan: (Listen to the comments so patiently) Jackson: (ask Dan something) Ariana: OK That‟s all, Ms Stt.010.Mssv.BKD002ac.email.ninhd 77.99.44.45.67.22.55.77.C.37.99.44.45.67.22.55.77.77.99.44.45.67.22.55.77.C.37.99.44.45.67.22.55.77.77.99.44.45.67.22.55.77.C.37.99.44.45.67.22.55.77.77.99.44.45.67.22.55.77.C.37.99.44.45.67.22.55.77.77.99.44.45.67.22.55.77.C.37.99.44.45.67.22.55.77.77.99.44.45.67.22.55.77.C.37.99.44.45.67.22.55.77t@edu.gmail.com.vn.bkc19134.hmu.edu.vn.Stt.010.Mssv.BKD002ac.email.ninhddtt@edu.gmail.com.vn.bkc19134.hmu.edu.vn 92 C.33.44.55.54.78.65.5.43.22.2.4 22.Tai lieu Luan 66.55.77.99 van Luan an.77.99.44.45.67.22.55.77.C.37.99.44.45.67.22.55.77.C.37.99.44.45.67.22.55.77.C.37.99.44.45.67.22.55.77.C.33.44.55.54.78.655.43.22.2.4.55.22 Do an.Tai lieu Luan van Luan an Do an.Tai lieu Luan van Luan an Do an T: Okay, thank you Who else? Ariana: Oh, wait One more, Ms Dan's intonation It’s not good Teacher: The intonation is not so good Ariana: It's not sad It's not happy, or whatever Tina seems bored and sleepy while listening to comments may be becasue she is tired Teacher: OK What's else? Ariana: Then about Cindy Teacher: Another! Do you want to give feedback to Dan? Class: No (shakes head) Mary: confused! Teacher: What is unclear? Mary: Um like the opening part Teacher: The opening? So what is about the opening? Mary: Hello My name is Mary and then nothing else! Teacher: Thank you! OK About Chi, please! Class: Me…(Many students are volunteering) Ariana: Me (loudly) Teacher: Yes, please! Ariana: Cindy, she wasn't serious when she was speaking Chi's pronunciation is not good Teacher: What? Which? Ariana: Some of the words that Cindy said “was” without /z/ Ms Teacher: /waz/? Ariana: Yes Cindy's intonation is as incorrect as Dan's Cindy’s opening is not developed Just “Hello! My name is … Dan: Ms Ms What is BÌNH BÌNH in my intonation? Teacher: It means you don't have voice raises and falls in your speeches/ Dan: Yes (Uncomfortable, disagree with that comment) Ariana: The main information is not clear Diana: Are you sure? Ariana: Yes! Diana: No I didn't think so! Teacher! 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